How to make readers delete your mail

How silly would that be? But from the looks of my mailbox, plenty of people are working hard at it.

One that stands out today says something like "Why Jerry hated my article." But guess what? When I scrolled down, I saw no mention of Jerry or an article. It was just a whole lot of short blurbs urging me to click and go to dozens of different places.

I deleted it. I'm not that curious about Jerry or her article.

I've said it before - nearly everyone has said it before - be sure your subject line is not only interesting enough to make people open your mail, but has some relevance to the message below it. Otherwise, people won't just delete this time - after you've done it to them a couple of times they'll automatically delete without bothering to look at what you have to say.

One of our most well-known copywriting gurus is doing that now - his headlines promise some information,but when you scroll down you find that you'll only get the information if you buy something. I don't even bother to look any more. I really should take the time to opt-out of his stuff, but the speed of my satellite connection leaves a lot to be desired, so I don't want to take the time.

So - if you offer something in your subject line, be sure your visitors find it quickly when they open your mail. Otherwise, you'll lose your credibility and the trust you work so hard to build.

Yours for prosperity,
Marte

Marketing without revealing the price

I've made up my mind - from now on curiosity can motivate the cat, but not me. When I get a promotion that doesn't reveal the price, I'm hitting the delete button.

How about you? Will you keep on clicking that buy now button just to see how much it is - and be drawn in to the next step in the letter to get you buy, buy, buy?

I remember a LONG time ago reading some of the rules for promotion. I mean the rules beyond giving the prospect a good reason why they should buy, appealing to emotions, being conversational, and remembering to include both some proof and a call to action.

These rules had more to do with ethics, or perhaps common sense, if you want your prospects to trust you.

One was to give your name and a way for would-be customers to contact you. Don't hide behind your copy and hope no one finds out who you are.

Another was to be up front about the price. I think maybe the final was to be honest - but hopefully that's a given.

Anyway, right after I read that, some of the "big guns" in internet marketing started leaving the price out of their promotions. It made me cranky then, and it makes me more cranky now.

So - add that to my New Year's Resolutions. No price, no curiosity. Just delete.

I'd love to hear your opinion!

Marte
writer@marte-cliff.com